I like this writeup, because it also suggests interesting *cultural* aspects. The sensualist, smart illuminati Kafers are going to live a very different life from the grunts in the barracks. Humans might encounter the latter most of the time and get the impression that Kafer civilization is simple, crude and utilitarian. Almost a parody of a communist dystopia. Imagine their surprise when they storm the upper levels of a Ch*!! and find rich draperies, piles of what must be books, mini-gardens and cabinets filled with wonders (and trophies!) from many worlds.
That's really one of the things I was trying for - that the human perception of Kafers isn't
wrong it's just
incomplete. Most human encounters with Kafers are with the dumber/lower levels of Kafer society.
There might also be different Kafer cultures. Some might go all out for maximizing a large, stupid population base and ruthless selection. Others might have gone for a more selective strategy, instituting very different styles. Imagine the surprise of encountering a small, hightech "elite" nation where deliberate intelligence training occurs, with a very distinct culture.
I was going to hold off on detailing my thoughts about "real" Kafer society for later (or never depending on interest - this thread seems to be a pretty "low interest" thread). But it's certainly something I was thinking about - Kafers, for an intelligent race, have a little too much cultural uniformity for my tastes. I have some theories on cultural evolution - that people deliberately develop different attitudes and methods as an evolutionary thing to ensure survival - loners and "small town" humans exist because they'd survive if something were to wipe out all of our cities. "Quislings" exist in humans because they'd be the ones who'd survive if all the "resisters" were wiped out, etc.
By my quasi-theory on social development, it'd say that Kafers would have different societies as well, just to eliminate the weakness of a single viewpoint making the race vulnerable to exploitation of that one society and wiping it out.
Another angle might be surveillance. How would these Kafers use surveillance? It might be a way for the smart ones to control the "masses" and coordinate (rather than control) society.
I imagine that the cities that are the most orthodox to Striker-Of-Stars original society would resemble many Third World cities today. There would be the city center (the true Ch*!!) where the elites live, which would probably be around less than 5% of the population. This is where the most intelligent Kafers live and the most critical services are located. Most of Kafer society's planning for the future occurs here, be it governmental or "corporate" (the term defined very loosely here). The majority of this city center's population are of the "Planner" rank.
In a ring around this center would be where the Kafer "middle class" dwells. These are Kafers who are intelligent enough to be trained for rote tasks and who have enough of a hold on their tempers to save fighting for societally accepted moments and won't fly into a destructive rage on a computer just because it didn't do what the Kafer wanted it to do (as a humorous side-note, I'd imagine Kafer break rooms to basically be a room that resembles are boxing gym where Kafers can engage in grooming fights, but also outdated computers and baseball bats there where Kafers can let off steam against the computers they work on - something perhaps human office workers might cite as an inherent superiority in Kafer worker-happiness thinking). This is where the vast majority of Kafer productivity occurs - factories, offices, and everything else would be concentrated here. Despite it's very high productivity, only about 30-40% of the Kafer population would live here. Kafers also have their own "urban angst" like humans do. Because of rote nature of their tasks, Kafers dwelling here have the fewest opportunities for consciousness-expanding violence compared to the Kafers of the "outside" and the Planners, whose wealth, leisure time, and need for creativity and intelligence on their jobs mean they are often getting into "grooming combat." Compared to this, a Kafer who operates a milling machine turning out parts has to be at its machine as many hours as possible to be productive as possible. Kafer middle-city dwellers cite the fear they are becoming dumb and that the Aach*Ah is coming to eat them as their primary fear and figures enormously in Kafer thought. Nevertheless, this population is kept mollified by the belief that those who truly excel here will be promoted to the innermost city (in reality this doesn't happen too often - planners require a level of intelligence, talent, and drive that most Kafers don't have).
Beyond a wall and often a large moat and so on, is the "outside." Over half of the Kafer population lives here. While biologically Kafers, they are considered to be "proto-Kafers" or "subkafers" by the Kafers themselves. It is here that Kafers are taken after being weaned by their parent. Though to a human outsider, it seems like chaos and anarchy, the "outside" is actually controlled and monitored. The outside is divided up into zones, each controlled by a "camp" where young Kafers are assigned (in theory, including young from the middle and inner city). It is in these camps that Kafers make their first social links, where they first engage in fights, and where many die. Each "camp" is associated some sort of resource, though like a
favelas the resources are pretty wretched - one camp might be associated with a sewage drain from the city. Another, where garbage (biodegradable stuff) is dumped. While still another is where broken down machinery and scrap metal is dumped. These camps are carefully arranged so that none of the camps actually have all the necessities for living. In addition, resources coming into the city itself is carefully diverted by the "outside" city - for instance, inaccessible overpasses and aqueducts or underground tunnels and pipes. With the inequality of vital resources, intelligence-expanding conflict in created. The camps organize and raid each other. The Kafers at the machine site have the best clubs and can fashion filters to get water from the sewage, but lack food and water. The garbage dump is the only place for food (either by eating the garbage directly or by eating the Kafer equivalent of rats). The sewage pipe is the only place to get water. In addition, each area has multiple camps that compete for the same resource.
While normally, this might result in great leaders organizing things for mutual beneficial trade or in conquered empires, the populations of the outsides are monitored. Kafers with organizing skills, or who show mechanical aptitude, or even are crafty killers are plucked from the outside. Depending on their level of talent, the majority are dumped into the middle city, while the brilliant and talented are taken directly to the core. Thus, the society of the outside is in constant, violent motion, with the cream that rises to the top constantly being skimmed off and new raw material constantly being added.
Despite this, Striker-of-Stars realized that no system like this would be perfect. Despite surveillance (before the advent of technology, this was done by infiltrators from the elite castes), there would be those who fell through the cracks of Kafer society. For such Kafers, there is also the possibility of self-promotion. The border between the outside and the middle city is heavily fortified as well as the guards of the middle city can make it. Despite this, it is expected that Kafers try and cross the border into the middle city where life is better. There are deliberately fashioned ways in, like maze-like sewers complete with deadly traps, periodic flushings guaranteed to drown those caught inside, and ladders, ramps, and not a single light in sight to create a vast deadly maze. All middle city dwellers participate for some weeks of a year in this border patrol - this is not considered a duty but a reward or a vacation. Patrols encounter infiltrators and these always result in good mortal fights (but very lopsided - the patrols have technological weapons like guns while their opponents usually don't), resulting in opportunities for consciousness-expanding fighting with the hopefuls being chased out or killed. Sometimes, however, Kafers find truly innovative ways in (which are celebrated) - like using a hot-air balloon to cross inside.
Kafers plucked from the outside, despite their potential are often still quite violent and not very well socialized. This is where they're again put into camps, where they are informed of the true reason for the system, and that it was designed to weed out the weak and stupid - that the Kafer is inside of this socialization camp means it was smart enough to start trekking down the road of destiny and awareness.
Of course, no society is perfect. And there are various social problems. For instance, the Kafer elites who still have children (like in many technological nations, the Kafer elites often don't mate as raising children takes a Kafer away from work and its own entertainment - this might be quite easy if a Kafer doesn't get pleasure from sex like most animals - they would have no temptation to "do it" for fun) often don't want to chance their own "superior" children to the outside like they're supposed to, weaning their children on smart drugs and educating them. Kafers in the middle city do the same. This is frowned upon and is illegal as it's thought that life on the outside is a much better way to winnow out the worthy from the unworthy.
But this isn't the only model of Kafer society, only the "normal" one. There's variants, especially those close to the Ylii.