These are really minor, but noticeable, and they do affect readability:
pg. 132 - Extra grey bar between the Ranks table.
pg. 138 - Grey bar missing at end of Earned Benefits table.
Many Duty Assignment tables - what do the brackets (8) mean around Rank Promo DCs? I can't find the explanatory text anywhere, IMO it should have been stated under the table as a note.
Feats - pg.108 mentions a PMOS feat, but it is not on any of the military service feat tables (seems strange). pg.109 mentions a Tactics feat which is the same as the Tactics I feat for Army, Marines and Travellers. I would imagine that special class feats should not be generally available? Also, it makes no sense to give the -4 penalty when using it 'untrained', as no one would ever bother doing this (unless you're suggesting that untrained leaders actually hamper their subordinates attack and defense rolls!?).
pg. 132 - Extra grey bar between the Ranks table.
pg. 138 - Grey bar missing at end of Earned Benefits table.
Many Duty Assignment tables - what do the brackets (8) mean around Rank Promo DCs? I can't find the explanatory text anywhere, IMO it should have been stated under the table as a note.
Feats - pg.108 mentions a PMOS feat, but it is not on any of the military service feat tables (seems strange). pg.109 mentions a Tactics feat which is the same as the Tactics I feat for Army, Marines and Travellers. I would imagine that special class feats should not be generally available? Also, it makes no sense to give the -4 penalty when using it 'untrained', as no one would ever bother doing this (unless you're suggesting that untrained leaders actually hamper their subordinates attack and defense rolls!?).