DMcCoy1693's CharGen Report
I made 2 characters last night and noticed a few problems:
-Benefits: It took me a few readings of the benefits explaination on page 4 of the CharGen section to understand that all benefits rolls are made when you leave a career. Also there was some confusion concerning the fact that there are 2 benefits tables: one the counterpart of cash and one that encompasses cash and benefits. Recommendations: Clearly state that all benefits rolls are made upon leaving a career and rename one of the benefits tables.
-Navy Rank: All other careers have their Rank Table beneath the Advancement Table. Navy has their's above the Survival Table. This disrupts the flow of CharGen. Recommendation: Move the Navy's Rank Table below Advancement Table.
-CM Table: I know this has been stated before, but I'll state it in the interest of completeness. The CM Table on page 2 has come confusion since 13 is stated twice. Also, to keep the flow of the numbers constant (and easier to remember), the +2 should be for 12-14 and the +3 should be 15+.
-Environment Table: On page 2, you pick the environment of your world. There is no "Earth-like" option. The closest I could figure is Fluid Oceans or Ice Capped, but I don't see how an earth-like planet would require everyone to be either Seafarers or Survivalists. Granted, I understand that it could be easily said that on such a planet, the player should just pick an environment that best suited their climate and move on. But the description does not currently say that. Recommendation: Clearly state that on Multi-environment worlds, the player should just pick which environment best suited their region that they grew up in.
-Generation Checklist: The Generation Checklist was very handy, but would be even more handy if it was closer to the front of Chargen, like at the very beginning. This way a player could read over it first and then figure out what each step meant as they continued on.
-Iron Man Generation: Instant Death upon failing the survival roll is rather harsh. My 2 characters failed 5 out of 8 survival rolls. One didn't have a stat below 7, the other had his survival rolls not depend on his weak stats. Recommendation: This should be changed to something like: "Option 1 on all survival tables be changed to Character Death," or something similar. Possibly, military careers should have a maybe options 1 and 6 changed to Death.
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