I submitted a review of this to rpg.net, then discovered an error (about Hi-pop rules) and also fleshed it out after getting some private feedback. Rpg.net have gone with the original version I sent them.
If you want to read the "extended remix", it's here on my website
The version on rpg.net is here
I'll ask rpg.net to switch.
If you want to read the "extended remix", it's here on my website
The version on rpg.net is here
I'll ask rpg.net to switch.