Much better layout than the last version.
Formating particulars, most of this is in view of making this match the rest of canon.
Text:
Headers throughout the document:
Even pages: Chapter Title - FFE
Odd Pages: Manual Title - Chapter title
Section Titles: The MT canon goes as follows:
1st level - bold all caps, then start next line
2nd level - bold, upper & lower case, text starts same line
3rd level - italicized only, text starts same line.
Tasks - Keep tasks at the same font size. The white space around it is enough to set it off.
Pg 1 - update copyright from 2008 to 2011.
Pg 8 - Master & slave networks - Bolded & italicized. Inconsistant w/ rest of titles.
Pg 9 - Add space above ACCOMODATION
Pg 9 - Fundamental Logic Programs - Bolded & italicized. Inconsistant w/ rest of titles.
Pg 24 - Sub paragraphs in ROBOTS ON STARSHIPS section - go wth 2nd level section titles.
Example: Dumb Warbots: Robots who are equipped.....
Charts:
1. Some charts have titles in the box, some do not. Every chart should have a title.
2. Charts should be in the same size typeface as text. We aren't getting any younger. When I retypset my MT manuals, I had to go from 7 point to 9 point. Yes, it added pages, so what, We don't have to do things in groups of 4 pages for publishing - PDF are the way to go.
3. Put the charts in the back of each chapter. That way, you don't have 1 line of information on 2 rows.
4. Highlighting. Great idea, but needs to be consistant.
5. Pg 12 - Skill charts - Dire need of highlighting to make readable. I'd recommend underlining every fifth row & again making this the same text size.
6. Chart table pages not numbered.
I would also recommend looking at moving the power supply to the end. The design sequence in canon doesn't work in this order. Every craft design generation example, moves Power supply to the end. This also needs to be changed in canon. If no one is following the design sequence because it doens't work, then it should be fixed.
7. Chart Section Titles: bold all-caps, centered.
8. Tables - right justify the rows to match canon.
9. Lines under column titles - consistant - I recommend 1 thickness. Also, each column title shouls sit on the line.
10. How did you make those boxes? I never did figure that part out.
11. Fully justify the text in boxes. Makes it easier to read.
12. Pg 18 - Software - consider making sub-tables (1b, 1c, etc for each of the *'s) It will break up the chart & should make it easier to find the skill you are looking for.
All in all, great work!
Formating particulars, most of this is in view of making this match the rest of canon.
Text:
Headers throughout the document:
Even pages: Chapter Title - FFE
Odd Pages: Manual Title - Chapter title
Section Titles: The MT canon goes as follows:
1st level - bold all caps, then start next line
2nd level - bold, upper & lower case, text starts same line
3rd level - italicized only, text starts same line.
Tasks - Keep tasks at the same font size. The white space around it is enough to set it off.
Pg 1 - update copyright from 2008 to 2011.
Pg 8 - Master & slave networks - Bolded & italicized. Inconsistant w/ rest of titles.
Pg 9 - Add space above ACCOMODATION
Pg 9 - Fundamental Logic Programs - Bolded & italicized. Inconsistant w/ rest of titles.
Pg 24 - Sub paragraphs in ROBOTS ON STARSHIPS section - go wth 2nd level section titles.
Example: Dumb Warbots: Robots who are equipped.....
Charts:
1. Some charts have titles in the box, some do not. Every chart should have a title.
2. Charts should be in the same size typeface as text. We aren't getting any younger. When I retypset my MT manuals, I had to go from 7 point to 9 point. Yes, it added pages, so what, We don't have to do things in groups of 4 pages for publishing - PDF are the way to go.
3. Put the charts in the back of each chapter. That way, you don't have 1 line of information on 2 rows.
4. Highlighting. Great idea, but needs to be consistant.
5. Pg 12 - Skill charts - Dire need of highlighting to make readable. I'd recommend underlining every fifth row & again making this the same text size.
6. Chart table pages not numbered.
I would also recommend looking at moving the power supply to the end. The design sequence in canon doesn't work in this order. Every craft design generation example, moves Power supply to the end. This also needs to be changed in canon. If no one is following the design sequence because it doens't work, then it should be fixed.
7. Chart Section Titles: bold all-caps, centered.
8. Tables - right justify the rows to match canon.
9. Lines under column titles - consistant - I recommend 1 thickness. Also, each column title shouls sit on the line.
10. How did you make those boxes? I never did figure that part out.
11. Fully justify the text in boxes. Makes it easier to read.
12. Pg 18 - Software - consider making sub-tables (1b, 1c, etc for each of the *'s) It will break up the chart & should make it easier to find the skill you are looking for.
All in all, great work!