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The 28th Annual "Let's make a Traveller Movie!" Thread

Even with buildign sets. One thing I always thought is that a Scout is a small cramped ship with little room to move around. It is not the bridge of the Enterprise or for that matter even the Defiant. Remember it does not have to look real it has to look real on video. Big difference.
When I was young (12)we made a star trek movie. (this was the 70's) . The sets were refridgerator boxes and christmas tree lights. With AMT models for the Enterprise. On 8mm it looked fairly convincing. In real life it looked like shite. Video is not as forgiving or as grainy but go get soem lumber amd make a few sets etc. If we make it over the summer hell I'll go to Toronto.
 
I could arrange vacation time to be part of a film. I could drive to most places in the Western US in a day. I've actually even been in a professional film (as a bit player, but hey I got paid)! I could also donate processor cycles assuming I have the right software.
 
Here's a suggestion: set up a site with everyone who's interested, their real names, emails, phone numbers (well, maybe) and what they'd be willing to do for the movie, plus what (if anything) they'd charge. Put me down for actor, with payment being travel and living expenses!
 
Okay guys, I just started this screenplay thing. At a page a day I should have something ready by May 1st. Here's the first 6.5 pages of the "damn the budget" version.
EXT. NIGHT - STARTOWN DISTRICT - REGINA

An officer of the Imperial Navy wearing the dirtside version of the class-B uniform (dirtside blues) with the rank of lieutenant commander steps out of a convenience store in the startown district, begins to walk down the street, he opens
a recently purchased cigarette pack, pulls out a cigarette, lights it, and is assaulted and killed by a gang that is wearing psionic shield helmets.

A shadowy figure whose face is unseen watches the murder of the Navy officer from a distance.

The GANG LEADER picks up the dead officer’s beret, trots up to the shadowy figure, and hands the beret to him.

INT. NIGHT - BEDROOM

The bedroom terminal of the apartment’s computer lights up and begins a morning wake-up call for NAVY LIEUTENANT SIR DENNIS STERLING.

COMPUTER

Good morning Lieutenant, it is 0500
hours local time, 1512 hours Imperial
Standard Navigational Time of (day) 122
(of year) 1089. You have a message from
Commander Svensen. You have a message
from your Mother.

Dennis throws one of his pillows and hits the bedroom terminal.

EXT. DAWN - IMPERIAL NAVY BASE - REGINA

People are doing their morning runs in a park-like area. Individually and in groups. Dennis passes a platoon of IMPERIAL MARINES who are running in the opposite direction. The Marines are led by a senior NCO in singing as they run.

MARINES

Left, left, left right left
Left, left, left right left

Two old ladies laying in a bed
One turned to the other and said
I want to be a three-aye Marine
I want to make the other sex scream
I want to go to Zho-dann!

Suit up, power up, check com-mo
Watch yourself and load am-mo

Sit down, strap in, seal cap-sule
Wait for drop and enjoy the view

Dennis sees a familiar looking woman in Marine exercise uniform running alone. He stops and watches her as she continues running.

INT. MORNING - HOSPITAL CAFETERIA - NEAR WINDOW

Seated near a window, Dennis is wearing his dirtside blues and is having breakfast with his MOTHER. Mother is confined to a wheelchair and cannot speak in the normal mode. She has to communicate psionically with others. A normal
eavesdropper would only hear Dennis’ side of the
conversation.

Mother makes a face as if she were asking a question.

DENNIS

I thought I saw Grace this morning.

Mother makes a face as if she were asking another question.

DENNIS

Yes, I would like to believe that.

Mother makes a face as if she were making a comment.

DENNIS

Minnie Hundinsel? Actually, I did sleep
with her.

Mother makes a face as if she were shocked to hear that.

DENNIS

Mom, everybody has slept with Minnie,
except Norris of course.

Mother, still shocked, makes a face as if she were asking a question.

DENNIS

Well, if you must know, it was the night
before I took off for Officer Candidate
School. I haven’t seen her since.

Dennis and Mother continue to eat in silence.

A bugle is being blown outside the building.

CUT TO:

EXT. MORNING

The bugle continues to be played as the black and gold banner of the Third Imperium is being raised on a flagpole. When the flag reaches the top the pole an Imperial Marine band begins to play the Anthem of the Third Imperium.

CUT TO:

INT. HOSPITAL CAFETERIA - NEAR WINDOW

Mother makes a face as if she were asking a question.

DENNIS

Yes, I do remember.

CUT TO:

INT. NIGHT - AUDITORIUM

A Seven-year old Dennis and his twin brother HARRY are part of a children’s choir singing the Anthem of the Third Imperium.

The parents of the children’s choir are in the audience.

Mother is in perfect health and is wearing the dress uniform of a lieutenant of the Imperial Navy. Dennis and Harry’s FATHER is sitting next to her in civilian attire.

CUT TO:

INT. HEADQUARTERS, IMPERIAL NAVY INTELLIGENCE

Dennis passes through a security checkpoint manned by Marines in the Imperial Navy Intelligence (INI) headquarters building. He then goes through an unmarked door into the anteroom of a cluster of offices. A PETTY OFFICER is seated
behind the receptionist desk. The petty officer speaks to Dennis.

PETTY OFFICER

Good morning Lieutenant.
Commander Svensen will see you
immediately, sir.

DENNIS (replying)

Thank you.

Sitting outside of the door to COMMANDER SVENSEN’S office is the woman that passed Dennis during the morning run. She is wearing the dirtside uniform of an Imperial Marine First
Lieutenant. Dennis opens the door and enters the office.

INT. COMMANDER SVENSEN’S OFFICE

Dennis steps to the front of the desk and snaps off a salute to the commander, a woman in her mid-forties.

DENNIS

Lieutenant Sterling reporting as ordered
ma’am.

The commander returns the salute and gestures toward one of the chairs in front of her desk.

SVENSEN


Please sit down.

Dennis sits in the chair.

SVENSEN

You know Lieutenant Commander Viande?

DENNIS

Yes, ma’am. How is Morty?

SVENSEN

He was found dead in the Startown
District this morning.

Dennis is stone-faced and silent.

SVENSEN

The provost marshal is handling the
investigation. Commander Viande was
scheduled to run a certification exam on
a new intelligence officer. I want you
to take his place.

DENNIS

Ma’am, that usually is a job for an oh-
four or higher.

Svensen opens a desk drawer, pulls out a set of insignia for a lieutenant commander.

SVENSEN

I’ve cleared this with the Subsector
Command.

Svensen places the set of insignia her desk directly in front of Dennis

SVENSEN

You are to be frocked as a lieutenant
commander.

Dennis picks up the insignia and examines them.

DENNIS

Well, I guess there isn’t a problem,
ma’am.


SVENSEN
Good.

Svensen touches an illuminated spot on the surface of her desk.

SVENSEN (to the intercom)

Chief, would you send in Lieutenant
Holland.

PETTY OFFICER (voice)

Aye, aye, ma’am.

With a sense of impending doom, Dennis stands up to meet First Lieutenant Grace Holland as she enters the office.

Grace confidently steps to the front of the desk and snaps off a salute to the commander.

GRACE

Lieutenant Holland reporting as ordered,
ma’am.

Svensen returns the salute and proceeds to introduce the two junior officers.
 
Actually, I think that's quite good. If you don't mind my suggestion, why not have "Dennis" and "Grace" be placed with a Detached Scout, maybe named (let me check my G:T core book) "Mazun" because the murder trail leads offworld and they need his Suleiman?
 
Looks good, but (and it's a big but) I think it'll be far too ambitious for a first attempt - half a dozen speaking parts, a dozen or so extras, several sets and locations, and that's just in the first six and a half minutes! If (and it's an even bigger if) we can prove we can make a shorter, simpler film then maybe we can try this. Let's not try running until we've mastered standing up without falling over.
 
Why not just go with the idea from the first post of this topic, about the three scouts and the Zhodani coin? One of the scouts - let's rename him "Mazun" - could be both part-Vilani and part-Zhodani (and I could pass as that, hint hint hint)...
 
I forgot to do an "establishing shot" sweeping from the starport to the startown district.

As I said, this is the "budget be damned" version. I'm basically doing it for practice at this point.

I already have an outline of where I want this to go. And I also cannot incorporate other people's characters into it.(There will be a converted type-S (operated by one of Dennie's old navy buddies) in it at some point.)

If anyone else wants have a go at writing a script, go ahead.
 
Originally posted by Leslie Bates:
</font><blockquote>quote:</font><hr />Originally posted by Blue Ghost:
The script;

I want an explosion on page 12, and at least three girls in bikinis... contact my people.
There's a nice website:

http://www.screenwriting.info/

That will tell you how to format your script and also has a decent glossary on screenwriting terminology.
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I've also spent fifteen years writing screenplays as well :rolleyes:
 
Leslie,

Nice one.
I'm not usually one to advocate thinking small, but I agree with Andrew. People and costumes are going to be the real scarce commodity on a project like this. Everything else can be cgi'ed. Try and keep the number of people per scene to a minimum. Equally, consider the size of the finished film. Keep timing down to a 20-30 minute short otherwise it'll take gigs of server space to host when complete.

Other than that, keep going. Your hard work is appreciated.

Crow
 
Leslie, very good job, indeed.
Could You somehow estimate what kind of CGI stuff You might need in the story ?
If You need a fully textured and detailed spaceport..(I dont know why, but all my designs resulted in something looking like DS9)...its already on my workbench..
 
Also think small. Keep the sets small. A scout is a great place to start from. Make the interior look small and cramped. thsi can be shot in a garage and a few trips to the lumberyard and some elbow grease. BTW here is a link for a quality fanfilm. http://www.3dexcellence.com/articlerevelations.html
I am thinking of starting out in a starport bar and the crew of 3 feeling low because of lack of prospects in the imediate area. They look on a star map and ask. Nobody goes there what do they have there? Do soem outdoor shots for the place set up a blue or greenscreen for some effect shots. Keep the number in the cast low and make everyone work on sets etc. Farm out the CGI have soem files transfered between people. For example send out OBJ files of the agreed upon ship for the film to the various CG artists. I can donate time for CG work too.
 
Originally posted by TheEngineer:
Leslie, very good job, indeed.
Could You somehow estimate what kind of CGI stuff You might need in the story ?
If You need a fully textured and detailed spaceport..(I dont know why, but all my designs resulted in something looking like DS9)...its already on my workbench..
No idea yet.

My goal at this point is to do a "licensed Traveller product" that could be flogged at game stores, conventions, and through an online catalog site. Also the SCI-FI Channel is paying $750,000 for the U.S.-Canadian distribution rights for independently made feature films.

My current project is not going to work as a fan film.
 
Hey Leslie, what are the parts and who would you cast for them? Seems like a very important issue to me.
 
"My goal at this point is to do a "licensed Traveller product""

Do you have a licence?

"Also the SCI-FI Channel is paying $750,000 for the U.S.-Canadian distribution rights for independently made feature films."

Do you seriously think you/we are capable of making a feature film?
 
Do you seriously think you/we are capable of making a feature film? [/QB]
Been there, done that, and got the T-shirt :cool:

I could (with the right backing)... I don't know about the rest of you
 
Originally posted by Andrew Boulton:
"My goal at this point is to do a "licensed Traveller product""

Do you have a licence?

"Also the SCI-FI Channel is paying $750,000 for the U.S.-Canadian distribution rights for independently made feature films."

Do you seriously think you/we are capable of making a feature film?
As I said, its a goal.
 
Goals are good. Aiming high is good. But if we're seriously considering doing this we need to aim for a goal we can hit. Start small. Prove we're capable of making a short film first. If we can do that, then afterwards we can try something bigger. Jumping straight into making a full-length film is asking for trouble.
 
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