Everything smaller than an AU is using the SI as the main unit system, apart from planet diameter, which is in miles.
Planet diameter should be in km, probably followed by miles in brackets.
Ex page 406:
Mainworld Size = 2D – 2 = 7 = 7,000 miles diameter.
should be
Mainworld Size = (2D – 2 = 7) * 1600 = 11,200 km (7,000 miles) diameter.
pages
-406 (4x)
-409: miles and km columns should be inverted
-413: a km column should be added at the left of the miles column (to gain space, skip the thousands)
-422
-424
-439: (2x) miles and km lines should be inverted
(World Size equals diameter of the World in Miles) should be something like (World Size equals diameter of the World in Km / 1600, or in miles / 1000)
-441 to 456: miles and km lines should be inverted
-442 to 449, 451, 452 (2x) and 456: km column should be added to the left of the miles column
Units should be given
-451, 452: miles and km lines should be inverted
A km column should be added at the left of the miles column
-457: (2x) miles and km lines should be inverted
(World Size equals diameter of the World in Miles) should be something like (World Size equals diameter of the World in Km / 1600, or in miles / 1000)
-685: (2x) (in miles) should be skipped, with the eHex digit size used. It also makes the equation clearer: Orbit = World Size x Multiplier (in thousand km); otherwise the thousand repeated factor can be confusing.
-709
-719- 720: a (km x1000) should be added above the (Miles x1000) line; (x4) others
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Gas giant can never become bigger than Jupiter (size T): the more massive they are, the more dense, up to the point of the smallest red dwarf stars having the same size as Jupiter.
Two exceptions:
- some close 0-orbits have the gas giant hot enough it expands
- a pre-singularity someone tinkered with the gas giant
page 413: During planet generation, results bigger than T should be read as T for the planet size unless in 0-orbit (or special case decided by the Referee)
Note that atmospheric gravity does increase, however, if it ever comes to play:
Size T (Jupiter) gravity: 2.5g
Size U: 4x = 10g
Size V: 16x = 40g
Size W: 36x = 90g
Size X: 64x = 160g
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Pages 408, 412, 556
There should be either an explanation or a reference to where the explanation is for type of stars. Not everyone knows spectral types, and those who do don't always know it by heart.
Planet diameter should be in km, probably followed by miles in brackets.
Ex page 406:
Mainworld Size = 2D – 2 = 7 = 7,000 miles diameter.
should be
Mainworld Size = (2D – 2 = 7) * 1600 = 11,200 km (7,000 miles) diameter.
pages
-406 (4x)
-409: miles and km columns should be inverted
-413: a km column should be added at the left of the miles column (to gain space, skip the thousands)
-422
-424
-439: (2x) miles and km lines should be inverted
(World Size equals diameter of the World in Miles) should be something like (World Size equals diameter of the World in Km / 1600, or in miles / 1000)
-441 to 456: miles and km lines should be inverted
-442 to 449, 451, 452 (2x) and 456: km column should be added to the left of the miles column
Units should be given
-451, 452: miles and km lines should be inverted
A km column should be added at the left of the miles column
-457: (2x) miles and km lines should be inverted
(World Size equals diameter of the World in Miles) should be something like (World Size equals diameter of the World in Km / 1600, or in miles / 1000)
-685: (2x) (in miles) should be skipped, with the eHex digit size used. It also makes the equation clearer: Orbit = World Size x Multiplier (in thousand km); otherwise the thousand repeated factor can be confusing.
-709
-719- 720: a (km x1000) should be added above the (Miles x1000) line; (x4) others
---
Gas giant can never become bigger than Jupiter (size T): the more massive they are, the more dense, up to the point of the smallest red dwarf stars having the same size as Jupiter.
Two exceptions:
- some close 0-orbits have the gas giant hot enough it expands
- a pre-singularity someone tinkered with the gas giant
page 413: During planet generation, results bigger than T should be read as T for the planet size unless in 0-orbit (or special case decided by the Referee)
Note that atmospheric gravity does increase, however, if it ever comes to play:
Size T (Jupiter) gravity: 2.5g
Size U: 4x = 10g
Size V: 16x = 40g
Size W: 36x = 90g
Size X: 64x = 160g
---
Pages 408, 412, 556
There should be either an explanation or a reference to where the explanation is for type of stars. Not everyone knows spectral types, and those who do don't always know it by heart.