We all want to follow the rules, but if you make them too strict or confusing many people will either ignore them or be driven away.
I just reviewed the "Traveller Logo License v1b". Here are my comments:
0. Understand that this is an
agreement between you and Mongoose. In essence, Mongoose is giving you the right to use the Traveller logo -- something you otherwise could not legally use. In exchange, you agree to various conditions and limits on the use of the logo. But you are *not* having to pay any money to use the logo, so you're getting a significant benefit here. In addition, this is a "default" agreement. Nothing would preclude Mongoose and FFE from agreeing to other terms. But that would be a separate agreement or written modification of this agreement and would be negotiated by the parties.
1. Mongoose can cancel the license at any time and require remaining stock to be destroyed. While this might seem draconian, the fact is that Mongoose has a legitimate interest in protecting the mark. You'll note that my previous suggestion envisioned a "cancellable at will" license, so obviously I think it's reasonable. Anyone who intends to invest a lot of money and effort in a Traveller product might want to get a more definitive agreement with Mongoose as to the license. However, this can be costly for a company. Ideally, they'll talk to their lawyer -- and that's not cheap. So you should be mindful of the fact that you're asking them to incur legal costs and consider whether you should offer some benefit to them to compensate for those costs.
2. The license can be modified at any time by Mongoose. Again, a seemingly draconian power, but it's really no big deal. Since they can cancel the license at will, the ability to modify it doesn't really add any additional power in the real world.
3. There are various requirements for how the logo is to be displayed. Very typical in these kinds of agreements.
4. You cannot duplicate (or replace) the character generation mechanics. Comment--I can certainly understand why Mongoose wouldn't want to give you a free license to use the Traveller logo in a game that attempts to *replace* MGT.
5. You cannot change established terminology for characteristics, world attributes (size, hydrographics, etc.) Comment--I can understand why Mongoose wouldn't want to give you a free license to use the Traveller logo in a game that attempts to *replace* MGT.
6. You are precluded from using certain established Traveller names -- "High Guard", "Mercenary", etc. Comment--As these titles are a key part of the value in the Traveller license, Mongoose has a legitimate interest in keeping others from using them in a Traveller product. After all, they *paid* for the right to use these titles.
7. You cannot duplicate classic Traveller's "look and feel". Comment--As the look of CT books are valuable elements of the Traveller license, I can certainly understand why Mongoose wouldn't want to give you a free license to use the Traveller logo in a game that uses the same look.
8. You agree to not use the term "Original Traveller Universe" in your product. Apparently, Mongoose intends to use this mark to identify certain types of products. <shrug> Don't see a problem with this myself.
9. You're required to include various sentences identifying owners of the trademark, etc. I see no problem here.
10. You agree not to use the logos on materials that MM and Mongoose deem inappropriate -- sexually explicit stuff, extremely violent, racist stuff, etc. I see no problem -- licensors commonly impose restrictions on the use of their marks and IP. In fact, I'd suspect that Mongoose agreed to those same terms in
its licensing agreement with FFE.
11. You agree not to use "...any material directly connected to the Original Traveller Universe setting..." I find this sentence to be rather vague. I think that I understand the intent, but I think that it should be tightened up. At the very least, include some examples of materials that are "directly connected" to the OTU. If you are unsure, I suggest that you ask Mongoose if they consider the material in question to be "directly connected" to the OTU. If they get a lot of (reasonable) questions, they'll probably clarify the language.
In my opinion, the Logo license is reasonable, fair and pretty clear. In essence, you get to use the Traveller logo for free, if you agree to abide by a few restrictions.
Caveat -- I'm a lawyer, but I'm not your lawyer. This is not intended to be legal advice or to create an attorney/client relationship. Heck, I could be hallucinating all this stuff. So pay a lawyer for advice that you intend to rely on.