Don't get me wrong I like it very much and am envious of the talent it takes to do something like that, it just seems "off" to me.
The lighting feels odd (the rear of the ships should be in shadow).
Everything is off on that last render. It borders closer to fantasy which gives it the wow factor compared to the other renders. It's all subjective now at this point if I post more renders. That's why art is never technically finished. It can go forever.
It's now time for me to create scenes using designs of my own instead of using copyrighted Traveller so I can make some money on the side.
I just thought of something while looking at these excellent renders. Could a merc ship activate thrusters in the boats to give it that extra speed to escape the missile or get to cover? It would probably damage integrity but could it happen?