far-trader
SOC-14 10K
Quick summary check on aramis' workups
Type S - spot on I'd say
Type A - ah, you under priced the streamlining by MCr1, the 10tons unused is a typo or adding error, and you didn't notate the lowberths (vol and cost but not what, threw me for a second), otherwise good
Type R - my price total is MCr1.8 more than yours, another typo or adding error, looks ok otherwise
Type M - looks right
Type Y - should be 14 staterooms (which will correct the price I think), my take comes out 12tons left over with the ATV included in the Boat tonnage (it's designated as "fitted to ferry the ATV" and would leave room for 7 passengers or some baggage)
Type C - looks ok I think
Type T - model/3 computer price should be MCr18, you missed adding the two triple lasers and two triple missiles
Type L - I come to 20tons over for a standard hull (1 ton wasted drive space), my suggestion to correct is reduce cargo to just 3tons (acceptable, preferred as least damaging, cargo not really needed aboard ship), the price is hard to call, the labs should cost something imo so maybe that's where the difference is to be made up
Type K - you've noted 2x hardpoints and 2x firecontrol (typos) but only allowed 1 of each (which is correct), streamlined cost is MCr1 too low, you've got a typo on the jump fuel in the tonnage column (should be 40 not 60) which is why you got pushed over, otherwise good, my suggestion for fixing the price is similar to the Lab Ship, the capture tanks and trophy lounge should cost something, the capture tanks need life support similar to staterooms for live specimen transport imo, the trophy lounge just some luxury appointments
Type S - spot on I'd say
Type A - ah, you under priced the streamlining by MCr1, the 10tons unused is a typo or adding error, and you didn't notate the lowberths (vol and cost but not what, threw me for a second), otherwise good
Type R - my price total is MCr1.8 more than yours, another typo or adding error, looks ok otherwise
Type M - looks right
Type Y - should be 14 staterooms (which will correct the price I think), my take comes out 12tons left over with the ATV included in the Boat tonnage (it's designated as "fitted to ferry the ATV" and would leave room for 7 passengers or some baggage)
Type C - looks ok I think
Type T - model/3 computer price should be MCr18, you missed adding the two triple lasers and two triple missiles
Type L - I come to 20tons over for a standard hull (1 ton wasted drive space), my suggestion to correct is reduce cargo to just 3tons (acceptable, preferred as least damaging, cargo not really needed aboard ship), the price is hard to call, the labs should cost something imo so maybe that's where the difference is to be made up
Type K - you've noted 2x hardpoints and 2x firecontrol (typos) but only allowed 1 of each (which is correct), streamlined cost is MCr1 too low, you've got a typo on the jump fuel in the tonnage column (should be 40 not 60) which is why you got pushed over, otherwise good, my suggestion for fixing the price is similar to the Lab Ship, the capture tanks and trophy lounge should cost something, the capture tanks need life support similar to staterooms for live specimen transport imo, the trophy lounge just some luxury appointments