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Spinward Traveller

I really want this project to succeed and I’ve been watching the kickstarter clips over and over. I know they are only quick mock-ups but something’s been bothering me about them that I couldn’t quite put my finger on until now: everyone who has appeared so far tends to come across as ‘acting’ ... except Brian Lewis who comes across as natural.

Now I’m not an expert or anything, so apologies if I’m out of line here, but is Lewis ‘film’ acting while everyone else is ‘stage’ acting? (Or is that just me?)
 
Hemdian said:
I really want this project to succeed and I’ve been watching the kickstarter clips over and over. I know they are only quick mock-ups but something’s been bothering me about them that I couldn’t quite put my finger on until now: everyone who has appeared so far tends to come across as ‘acting’ ... except Brian Lewis who comes across as natural.

Now I’m not an expert or anything, so apologies if I’m out of line here, but is Lewis ‘film’ acting while everyone else is ‘stage’ acting? (Or is that just me?)
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Many of our actors are stage actors, and once we have ample time to work with everyone, you will be able to see the difference a few days of rehearsal can add. We shot every clip in 16 hrs, which sounds like a lot of time--- but its really not. Also, it rained that day so several outdoors shots had to be moved to green screen.

We do hope to look less cardboard than the first season of ST:TNG. :-)

-Ken
 
I'm looking forward to it.

Here's a question; are you accepting spec scripts for possible future production? If so, then do I have to be repped, or can you just shoot me a release? Do you have a bible for setting and characters that writers can reference?
 
If they can extend it somehow until mid-August, they'll get $100 or more from me. Unfortunately with the current cutoff in July, I can only give a token - maybe $10 just to show support, I guess.
 
Blue Ghost said:
I'm looking forward to it.

Here's a question; are you accepting spec scripts for possible future production? If so, then do I have to be repped, or can you just shoot me a release? Do you have a bible for setting and characters that writers can reference?
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We have a team of writers and a 1, 3 and 5 year story arc. However, we will open the world up for fan fiction. Allowing some secondary and tertiary characters to be fleshed out.

It will actually be a testing ground for future writers. Kind of a work your way in, kinda deal. :-)
 
SpaceBadger said:
If they can extend it somehow until mid-August, they'll get $100 or more from me. Unfortunately with the current cutoff in July, I can only give a token - maybe $10 just to show support, I guess.
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Actually just spreading the work is a hugs help. We will offer some special items on our we site to pay for future episodes. Thank you for your support!
 
Ken Whitman said:
We have a team of writers and a 1, 3 and 5 year story arc. However, we will open the world up for fan fiction. Allowing some secondary and tertiary characters to be fleshed out.

It will actually be a testing ground for future writers. Kind of a work your way in, kinda deal. :-)
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Well, forget it then, but thanks. All the best.
 
Below is a quick look at the open scene of Spinward Traveller. If you are interested in seeing the entire script, and maybe have some input into the series, then we have a new reward for you.

SCRIPT SUPERVISOR PACKAGE: You will receive the SIGNATURE PACKAGE & a chance to review all scripts and suggest changes. You will be listed on IMDB and receive direct e-mail and phone numbers to script writers and producers of the show. Make your voice heard, and help keep the Traveller RPG the main focus of the show! $250 & limited to 12

---------------


SPINWARD TRAVLLER
(c) 2014 d20 Entertainment

1. EXT. BLACKNESS OF SPACE. PLANET.

2. INT. BEOWULF. SPACE A POV shot of sticker or sign reading “Travel Safe.” A loud boom is heard, along with creaking as the ship is under attack. Heavy breathing is heard as we see Jon’s hands raised as he heads out of the cabin up to the high birth room. As music swells, we see three pirate ships surrounding the Beowulf. A light from the center ship glows as we see a missile fired and soaring for the ship.

3. INT. JON’S CABIN. PLANET Jon wakes up lying in his bunk. A banging is heard on the door.

OFFICER:
Jon! Let’s go! You’re beyond late!
You have to get ready for transport!

Jon sits up and sarcastically responds. JON Good morning to you too.

4. INT. TERMINAL. PLANET. A group of brokers walks by as we see the camera pan down and up to the face of TAM speaking some someone on a com that cannot be heard.

TAM:
Do you trust me? I know he’s here.
I’ll know when I see him.

TAM turns to survey the area, but is ran into by JON who is buttoning his jacket and not paying attention. JON collapses and TAM does not move. JON stares at her from the ground.

JON:
Why were you just standing there?
This area is for important personel only!
TAM:
(Sarcastic) Oh, are you important?
JON:
Yes…well…no. I have to go.

TAM stares at JON as he awkwardly stands and walks past her. Tam taps her com staring in the same direction that JON exited.

TAM:
He’s headed your way.
5. INT. ELEVATOR. TERMINAL Jon stands inside of elevator impatiently waiting. The elevator slows to stop.

JON:
Oh come on! I’m going to miss my transport.
The doors open and we see the captain smiling at JON. She enters the elevator and presses a floor. There is an awkward moment of silence as the CAPTAIN stares at JON and the initiates the conversation.

CAPTAIN:
So do you like what you do?
JON:
I’m sorry?
CAPTAIN:
Working for the corporation?
JON:
You’re a bit forward aren’t you?
CAPTAIN:
Just trying to make conversation…
JON:
I’m sorry it’s been a rough start to a busy morning, but
to answer your question no. My career has lost its shine.
CAPTAIN:
Don’t you ever want more for yourself?
JON:
Doesn’t everyone?

The elevator slows.

CAPTAIN:
Well this is me. It was nice meeting you…uh?
(Extending hand)
JON:
(shaking the CAPTAIN’s hand) JON, JON SPINWARD.

JON is drugged by the handshake and starts to rub his eyes and appears to be drunk.

JON:
What are you doing to me?
CAPTAIN:
I’m giving you want you want.....More.

6. EXT. TERMINAL BAY. PLANET The doors open as TAM greets the CAPTAIN. JON is on the CAPTAIN’S shoulder. TAM goes to the other side and places JON’s arm around her neck.

JON:
Oh it’s you again. Fancy meeting you here.
(JON passes out)
TAM:
I think you gave him too much.
CAPTAIN:
We have to hurry before someone sees us.

A cloaked male figure slowly approaches CAPTAIN SHAVEK with his sword drawn. The group passes a pillar heading to the ship, which is ready for takeoff. We see a man in a dark cloak come from behind the pillar and follow.

7. INT. BEOWULF. TERMINAL The captain walks to cockpit and radios to MEME in the engine room. MEME looks up at the monitor.

CAPTAIN:
We got what we need. Let’s get far away from this place. How’s the fire below?
MEME:
I’ve been waiting on you. Fire it up Captain!

The BEOWULF raises its landing gear lifts up turns and soars past the camera as we see the opening credits.
 
Sounds pretty cool so far. I like the idea that Jon is the fall guy, the funny guy (even inadvertently), while the rest of the crew are all the serious ones. What's a "high birth room"?
 
It's a misspelling. It should read "High Berth Room", as in the three general passage rates that ships carry: high passengers, middle passengers, and low passengers.
 
It's looking good Mr Whitman. Glad someone is going to make a Traveller movie.

Personally I think your approach to the production is very accomodating being that you already have a story idea in the works and most of your production plans organised. It would be unfair of anyone to expect to be a core writer for the show for at least this very first episode. So any contributions considered should be met with thanks from writers if anything.

Fingers crossed there can be a sequel and by that point a lot more people will know about it and help to make it even better.

The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step as they say.

Way to go.
 
extra swag bonus:

If you are interested in an add-on below just add the value below to your current pledge.

Limited Edition Resin Beowulf with stand ...$100 US / $140 Int'l This 16cm resin model is Limited to Kickstart brokers, each are hand painted and come with a Letter of Authenticity.

If you purchase this add-on, please send a message to us letting us know you increased your pledge, this will determine your number value in the limited edition limited print run. Number values are assigned first come first serve.

this would be cool
 
Add-on are here for Spinward Traveller

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/d20e/spinward-traveller-tv-pilot


If you are interested in an add-on below just add the value below to your current pledge. If you do not increase your pledge you will not receive these items. After the Kickstarter is over, you will be sent a survey, we will ask you what Add-ons you purchased (you may not order more than 10 of any one item below.)

Available for backers
Crew Shirt (Full color)*............. $30 / $38 International
Personal UPP Shirt *................ $30 / $38 International
25mm Miniature of Beowulf .... $25 / $32 International
Digital soundtrack of Show..... $15
16cm Resin Beowulf............... $105 / $140 International
Digital PDF Script.................... $50 (once it has been signed off on by the producers)

Available for backers who pledged $30 or more
Crew Shirt (Full color)*....................... $20
Personal UPP Shirt* .......................... $20
25mm Miniature of Beowulf ............ $20
Additional copy of the show DVD.... $20
Additional poster of the show.......... $10
16cm Resin Beowulf........................ $100

Available for backers who pledged $100 or more backers
Everything in lower add-on packages
Additional copy of the show DVD (signed).... $20
Additional poster of the show (signed).......... $10

Available for backers who pledged $1000 or more backers
Everything in lower add-on packages
Script Supervision........................................ $150

If you purchase this add-on for the 16cm Resin Beowulf, please send a message to us letting us know you increased your pledge, this will determine your number value in the limited edition limited print run. Number values are assigned first come first serve.

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