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The Artemis Files, a new SF fiction series inspired by Traveller

I pass on all comments to the author.

The good thing about the free sample is that it allows you to see if the book interests you or not.

This is why I am recommending that the sample be read. It is great that Smashwords offer the service. Amazon do as well, but it is a tad more convoluted to obtain.
 
I would encourage anyone who chooses to review this to do one as an "Off the Table" for Freelance Traveller - while I don't have the 'reach' of Amazon or Smashwords or DTRPG or RPG.net, I seem to be higher-profile in the Traveller community than I think is really probable (or even plausible), so...
 
Cool, thanks. I was looking for something new to read and the promise of this hits the spot!

If nobody beats me to it, I'll review it for Freelance Traveller. It's about time I gave something back to FT.
 
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Please comment here as well if you could. It would be great to see. I report everything back to Brad as well, to provide feedback. He has also organised a paperback edition "print on demand" for those who prefer dead tree books.

A review in freelance would be fantastic!

I have been provided some snippets of what is in the next book or two and there will be some good stuff coming, enough to show more of the Traveller origins of the series.
 
If I were to make one criticism it is - don't make it read like a teenage soft ⌧ novel.

By the end of the free intro we are well aware of the young lady's attributes but I couldn't tell you what the other two characters even look like.

Agreed - the author fell into the classic trap of many new authors. Way too much time spent on lovingly painting their lead character's physical characteristics, not enough time on story.

At least the sample was honest though. It made it clear to me that I am not the target demographic. (Not a teen, not into "bodice rippers".)
 
Review written and submitted to you Jeff. Madmike, if you PM me Bradley's email address, I'll email him a copy of the review if he wants; I've picked up a few typos which I can point him to as well.
best
Ravi.
 
Got it; read/responded to your other message before seeing this one. Little disrupted here because of a certain bit of inclement weather.
 
Hi folks,

Just want to pop my head in here to say g'day... and many thanks for all your comments about 'Elysium'. It's really appreciated, warts and all.

Yep, I'm the author and it was great to see the different views and take on it, and especially the review by Ravi. It was in part written for people like you on this forum/community, and to a lesser degree to appeal to a wider mass market (which I'm sure you can tell).

The second book is out there in the wilds now, and contains a different style story again... as will the third one when it is released in January... and so on until the story arc is finished (yes, the is a definite end to the series).

All the best,
Brad
 
For those interested in Book 3 - Durendal, it's coming very soon but not until the end of this month (February). Work and Vacation(s) caused a misjump and slowed things down on the navigation roll...

In the meantime I uploaded a novella called 'Lexington' at the usual ebook outlets (except for DTRPG - still need to do pop them up there).
 
As an aspiring sf novelist myself, I am interested to hear how the "indie" publishing is working out for you, what made you choose it over conventional publishing, and how you went about it. I hadn't really considered it much before, except as a contingency in case no one accepts what I have to write, but perhaps I should look at it more closely to weigh my options. Thanks!
 
Hi Murdoc,

I'll admit it's been an interesting experience and one I wish I had done years ago.

I'm trying to avoid writing a novel about the ins & outs here (I think I failed in that attempt)… But it basically all came about 7 years ago when I moved from Oz to Ireland. With a lot of time up my sleeve until I started working here & my wife joined me, I finally started writing properly. Something I'd been doing on and off since high school. In a matter of 6 months or so I'd written my first book (still not published) and then spent the last 7 years refining, polishing, expanding, splitting it into 2, etc… and then it all came to a head last year when I was getting sick of not having anything out there and constantly trying to polish what I'd done and never being happy with it.

My original intention had always been to try and get a book deal, hence refining the works that had by then become 3.5 very large books (circa 150,000-180,000 words each). After being too busy with work to keep up with changes in the publishing world until the middle of last year, I realised the game had changed and the balance of power shifted from the Big 6 publishers to the Indies with companies like Amazon & Smash making it easier for the average person to get their works out there in ebook format. Sure, quality, grammar, editing varies by a long mile, but as I'm finding, it's another learning curve which helps in your writing and each book (hopefully) is getting better - but I'm biased on that point :)

The upshot is that near the end of last year I focused on writing something new which might serve as a lead-in to my writing style, the universe, and the big sagas waiting in the wings to finally be polished (fingers crossed for late this year). But I'm having so much fun writing these smaller novels that the original books I planned in this lead-in series are expanding out to a few more so I can refine my style, setting and play with the key characters some more.

As for success, it's still early days. I'm certainly no Randolph Lalonde or Evan Currie, etc… with their levels of success or following; but the downloads I'm getting are better than I ever imagined. Best case I thought might be for a dozen to friends, family or work colleagues, but across the 2 novels out there now I'm seeing downloads to date of around 200 (I'm not afraid to share the figure). Again, other Indies out there do that number in a day or hour thanks to marketing efforts or the sheer number of books they've written, but for me it's unbelievable & a tremendous motivator to keep doing it. The hardest challenge is discoverability amongst so many other authors… I'm not doing any marketing (except for the mention here & to friends) so it's only word of mouth getting these out there. But at the moment, I just want to focus on the writing instead of marketing… once I have half a dozen books out there I might take a rest and do some above the line marketing… but at the moment it's all about the writing.

Why go Indie and not hold out for a deal? I guess after spending a lot of time on some of the blogs (Dean Wesley Smith and his wife Kris Rusch, or 'The Passive Voice' it helped push me over the edge & take a chance. Be careful… spend time on Dean's blog reading through some of his posts and it might push you over the edge too :)

My advice if you're thinking of testing the water & publishing Indie, is to go for it! If you're not sure if you want to use your real name, both 'Zon, Smash, and the others let you use a pseudonym instead so you don't spoil your chance of going traditional later.

One thing I keep hearing in different formats is that for a new writer to get known out there, it's like a new band/musician. Until people have heard of you, read/listened to your work and develop a trust/happiness with your style it can be an uphill battle to grow a following. For some people, the stars align and Hivers intervene so everything happens in perfect harmony and they become instant top of the list authors with traditional publishers begging for their rights... or it takes them a few years before that happens after writing + publishing, in a rinse/repeat cycle.

In the meantime, I'm having a lot of fun doing this and dip into Traveller to flesh out my characters for stats, skills and background which is then adapted for the books. I read today that quite a few Indie fantasy writers do something simlar using AD&D for their book characters.

((Apologies if this has put you to sleep! ))

Brad
 
For anyone interested, I've finished writing and released 'The Artemis Files Book 3 - Durendal' early in the morning at all the usual locations. It's a fair size larger than the previous stories (100,000 words vs the normal 65,000 words), and 'hopefully' just as entertaining for you.

I need to warn you... It also includes a cameo appearance by a certain person on these forums that wrote the review of the first book mentioned in the Freelance Traveller mag!

I just hope he forgives me for what I've done to him! ;)
 
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