Not bad.Basically "forward observers" done for the navy instead of the army?
Definitely a viable option ... however ... if you're going to be "handing off" targeting data like that through a communications pipeline, if I were the Referee I would argue that the lowest computer model in the chain determines the relative computer size for the shot taken.
So if you've got a Type-S Scout/Courier "forward observing" for some sort of cruiser or battleship, then the spinal mount gets fired using a model/1bis for the "relative computer size" contest ... not a model/9fib.
Thus the "forward observer" tactic is POSSIBLE, but depending on the assets involved can wind up being decidedly sub-optimal.
So if you modify the fleet assets a bit, you can use a Destroyer Escort with a model/9fib computer as your "forward observer" handing off targeting data to the cruiser or battleship (which also has a model/9fib computer) and thus the "relative computer size" would use a 9fib for the contest with the target.
When the computer model of observer and shooter are the same is when you can achieve optimal results.
I think the metaphor would be more like spotter planes off battleships or the battlecruiser squadrons of the WWI RN.
If we are talking planetary sensors pretty easy to tie them to best computer models.